This contains the feedback Miss Nair gave us for our original storyboard.
In shots 4 and 5 of the original storyboard, the titles come too soon and the storyboard itself is too long. These two shots should be combined into one and there should be a credit after he picks the gun up. The storyboard should end in shot 24. We should also skip shots 13-18 as it is too complicated and there are also too many settings which will be complicated. In shot 30 if we use it, she should ignore him instead of speaking. Shot 31 should be a meium shot of him confused then starting to work. We should try to use an actual teacher in shot 20 and in the ending. There should be blinking near the end of our opening sequence as some shots should cut to black and therefore show credits. In the daydream you should hear his voice being called and therefore Shamus wakes up in the classroom. The teacher will be double acting as the final bandit and a teacher in the last shot of our opening sequence
In shots 4 and 5 of the original storyboard, the titles come too soon and the storyboard itself is too long. These two shots should be combined into one and there should be a credit after he picks the gun up. The storyboard should end in shot 24. We should also skip shots 13-18 as it is too complicated and there are also too many settings which will be complicated. In shot 30 if we use it, she should ignore him instead of speaking. Shot 31 should be a meium shot of him confused then starting to work. We should try to use an actual teacher in shot 20 and in the ending. There should be blinking near the end of our opening sequence as some shots should cut to black and therefore show credits. In the daydream you should hear his voice being called and therefore Shamus wakes up in the classroom. The teacher will be double acting as the final bandit and a teacher in the last shot of our opening sequence
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